Patchwork Heroes 'Oops' List
Ok, so I'm not perfect. Yeah, I
know it's a shock. But I have made a few mistakes over the course of my comics.
The ones that I've found are listed below (note: spelling and grammar errors are
not included. I'm talking about continuity errors here.)
If you find a mistake
I didn't mention, feel free to send me an email, and I'll add it here. If you
do, you get 10 yetibucks.
Mistakes:
Comic #1 - Two characters
appear in this comic that really shouldn't. The first, a knight laughing in the
fourth panel, is Darren Cutley, Artannic knight. He was cut from the script for
a variety of reasons, mainly that there was nothing he had to do - he became a
secondary character instead. In the fifth panel, Lucas is supposed to be facing
off against Perinas Kaebor, Fury of Fear. That was before I decided that the Furies
should have a uniform, and not look like demon ninja.
Comic #2 - Friv
refers to the only town nearby as Aspendale. It later became Shenir. Shenir is
the correct name for the town.
Comic #5 - Once again, Darren appears
in the opening shot for the act, and Shari doesn't. I hadn't quite hammered down
the plot yet at this point.
Comic #15 - Kasaii says that Friv's mom
left a long time ago. This contradicts both Friv's diary in Comic #2, which says
that both his parents left, and his later story to Shari, which says that it was
his dad that left first. Friv knows what he's talking about. I forgot.
Comic
#28 - Kasaii says that the Furies have been around for over a hundred years.
They have, in fact, been around for quite a bit over a hundred years. Specifically,
just past 400 years. He also drops the second 'n' in Artannia.
Comic #31
- Salamon has green eyes. All the furies have red eyes. I hadn't decided on that
yet, and when I did, I forgot that I'd already shown Salamon.
Comic #64
- Shari says that she's from the Three Stars clan. This was before I settled the
issue of the language and technology of the tribes. Consider Kalahann to be her
correct tribe.
Comic #69 - I did it again. Kasaii says that the group
is almost to Redmond. Redmond does not, in fact, exist. Kasaii is referring to
Dernel.
Comic #91 - I don't know what it is about this town! Redmond
has become Timerberfield. Which is still actually Dernel. Eheh.
Comic #118
- I accidentally used an old draft of Garanor on the Act 2 cover, with Lucas-coloured
hair and an Artannic skin tone. It won't happen again.
Comic #140 -
In Panel 5, Sarah says 'He mentioned a swordswoman name Dana'. It should have
been 'named'. Oops.
Comic #193 - Man, this is a dumb one. The title
of the comic here is 'Meanwhile, back in Cianna'. Which is funny, seeing as Friv
and Shari aren't in Cianna. They're in Remenn. Dana and Kasaii are in Cianna.
The title should be 'Meanwhile, back in Remenn'.
Comic #257 - In Panel
4, Perinas is supposed to be talking, not Garanor.